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Post by Ember on Jan 17, 2008 17:57:34 GMT -5
Name: Natalie Jane Wintherow
Codename: Ember
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Description: Height: 5’4”
Weight: 101
Hair: shoulder length curvy blond hair.
Eyes: Hazel green eyes
Physical Description: Ember with her blond hair always has the first impression of boys "HOT". Ember always keeps herself in shape by doing gymnastics but some people just say she is to skinny but really its just because its all muscle .
Mutation:She can manipulate fire produce it ect..ect. Her Powers are very hard to control. Since she usually wait always looses her temper.
Personality: Unpredictable. That word describes Ember perfectly. Sometimes she looses her temper she sets things on fire , and normally gets in trouble for it – when she gets caught. She has a unpredictable personality and can be quite temperamental.
Weaknesses: Water she cant stand cold water its like being stuck in the Arctic for a week to her. Her other weaknesses include loosing her temper.
Affiliation:X-men
Other Characters: None yet, How Did You Find This Forum: Goggle
Your Nickname: Envy
Other Comments: She was born in Los Angels California
Family Mother: Mary Valerie Wintherow Father: Nicolas Jack Wintherow
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Post by Pause on Jan 18, 2008 3:37:51 GMT -5
In the mutation part, You need to further explain what her powers are. You say they are hard to control because she looses her temper - What is hard to control?
In the Affiliation, you need to choose which Affiliation she is going to be a part of - just one.
If you could make those few changes and be sure to read the rules that would be great!
Pause
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Post by Ember on Jan 18, 2008 10:38:14 GMT -5
oops sorry I space out everyonce in a while and im sure I always for get somthing...
Anyways I edited
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Post by Pause on Jan 18, 2008 11:58:25 GMT -5
ACCEPTED
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Post by Ember on Jan 18, 2008 18:50:21 GMT -5
thank you Ill start on my avi and sig
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